There are many reasons that can motivate a person to stay working for the same company. Some believe that money is the main reason.
Do you agree or disagree?
What are some other reasons why people may stay?
Not responding fully to both questions
Level 6 for task response requires that you: Address all parts of the task although some parts may be more fully covered than others. Level 7 requires that you: Fully address all parts of the task. From this perspective it is vital that you answer both questions fully in order to reach 7 and above.
Not introducing both questions in the introduction.
As mentioned above it is vital that your essay focuses on both questions in the essay. It is misleading to only introduce one of the questions in the introduction.
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