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CELPIP Essay Question

Writing Performance Standards

1. Content/Coherence: 

•            Number of ideas

•            Quality of ideas

•            Organization of ideas

•            Examples and supporting details

2. Vocabulary:  

•            Word choice

•            Suitable use of words and phrases

•            Range of words and phrases

•            Precision and accuracy

3. Readability:  

•            Format and paragraphing

•            Connectors and transitions

•            Grammar and sentence structure

•            Spelling and punctuation

4. Task Fulfillment:        

•            Relevance

•            Completeness

•            Tone

•            Word count

Email Task Instructions

Read the following information.

You recently made reservations for dinner at a very famous and expensive restaurant in town. However, the meal and the service were terrible. The restaurant manager was not available to solve the problem, so you left without a resolution.

Write an email to the restaurant’s manager in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:

  • State what problems you had with the food you ordered.
  • Complain about the service.
  • Describe how you want the restaurant to resolve the problem to your satisfaction.

Email Student’s Answer

Survey Task Instructions

City Development Survey

You live in a small town of 10,000 people. A large green area in the centre of town is undeveloped. The city has sent out an opinion survey to see what residents would like to have built in that area.

Choose the option that you prefer. Why do you prefer your choice? Explain the reasons for your choice. Write about 150-200 words.

Option A: Shopping Complex: This shopping mall would include restaurants, a large supermarket, and a movie theatre.

Option B: Recreational Park: This park would include a sports complex, a large green area, and a small petting zoo.

Student’s Answer with Corrections

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