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I wish there was some sort of acknowledgment mechanism to put the new entrants at ease and stop them from spamming you 🙂
Something like task received, now wait for 24 hours.
I am jumping at every beep on my phone and checking if there is a reply and worrying if the email is not received, or when my 24 hours start.
I was really hoping to receive a response by 11 pm Australia time, do you think that’s possible?
Again, apologies for the multiple emails.
Hi, I have your task and will get it back to you soon.
If I have to acknowledgment receiving each task it will slow me down too much.
I’ll have your task back to you in about 3 hours.
Fridays are always busy!
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This topic is about studying online. Nowadays, with this virus (Covid-19), some schools and parents prefer to teach their students online at home. However, some schools and parents prefer to teach their students at school. In fact, I will now discuss and give my opinion.
On one side, some schools or parents think that online learning is better for students. In fact, with this virus, students can get sick. For example, this virus is one type of infectious disease, so students can get COVID-19 so easily and quickly. So, this is why some parents or schools believe studying online at home is better and safer.
On the other hand, some schools or parents think that studying in school is better. Additionally, students can get help with their tests or exams from their parents or sisters at home. For example, parents who work as teachers can help their children in the exam so they get a high mark. So, that is why some schools or parents believe studying at the school is better.
In my opinion, I think studying both online and at school is a great idea. Moreover, students can study at home (online) for their own safety. In fact, when they have their final exam, they can go to school and get their exams. Also, schools should take precautions.
In conclusion, I advise many parents to help the schools and government. Actually, they should take care of their children, encourage them to learn more, and depend on themselves. Also, they should study well and take the exam on their own.
I can guess that the question was “discuss both sides of the argument and give your own opinion”… The structure you used is okay but I suggest you use the structure here:
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I’ve just sent you an email including some documents to help you.
Hello, Mr. Mike!
I have paid the package: 4 tasks and emailed you my essays via examiner@wordpress-980111-3436014.cloudwaysapps.com yesterday. But unfortunately, sending emails failed because of the wrong recipient’s email.
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I just sent you an email.
Hi,
I have paid the Writing correction service. Do I have to wait for any confirmations or I just send the writing paper to your email?
Hi, you can just start sending tasks to my email. I will send you an email with a few documents to help you get started.
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I have enrolled for quick course for writing and its been almost 2 days I haven’t received feedback. Hope things are good at your end and I will receive the feedback soon.
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Mr. Mike, I am having the same problem. Can you please check my email.
You mention “same problem” but I don’t know what problem it is the same as.
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Hi Mike,
I have sent an enquiry about the essay correction service by filling a form yesterday. However, I haven’t got any response yet.
I’ve also added a comment yesterday as a sample essay for your review.
Just wanted to ensure that the site is working before I make payment. 😊
FYI: I have already appeared for a general ielts exam twice, and I end up getting a 6.5 in writing. My minimum requirement is a band 7 in writing for my immigration purpose as a dentist to canada.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon
I have replied now.
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Question: Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
People have different views on the level of independence people have in the contemporary world. While some argue that people depend more on one another, I believe people have become more independent and self-sufficient in the modern world.
There are two main reasons why it could be argued that we are more dependent on each other. Firstly, life has become more complex and difficult, especially because the cost of living has increased as compared to the past times. For example, youngsters have to rely upon their parents when they buy a new property in order to pay a mortgage and housing tax. Another reason is that people seem to become more ambitious today and therefore to fulfil their growing needs both parents are usually working in a family. Owing to this fact, they depend upon grandparents or babysitters to look after the children.
However, I would agree with those who believe that people are more independent these days. In most countries, families are becoming smaller and more dispersed, which means that people do not count on their relatives as they used to. People in the modern world have more freedom to travel and live away from their families. For example, most of the people choose to study overseas instead of studying in the university of their hometown, and this experience makes them more independent as they learn to live alone. Another factor in this growing independence is technology, which gives everyone a sense of independence by working alone from any part of the world.
To conclude, although, to some extent, there are reasons to believe that people now depend on each other more, in my view, we are more independent than ever.
1. Your introduction does not introduce the question well. I suggest ” This essay discusses both sides of this argument and explains why I believe people have become more independent and self-sufficient in the modern world”
2. Paragraph 3 has only one sentence for your 2nd reason and I suggest at least two.
3. The conclusion should summarise the reasons for your opinion from the body of the essay.
After a quick read I guess this is around a band 7 to 7.5. If you use my writing correction service I will give you an accurate score for each of the four criteria and a lot more feedback:
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Thank you very much. I have received the mail! It seemed I have provided the other email address.
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Hi. I want to get a 7.0+ band score in writing. What is the best strategy for me?
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Hi, I just purchased your writing correction service: 10 tasks. However, because this is my first time, I was quite confused and worried when sending an email to your email address. Therefore, I just accidentally sent you the wrong file (that one contains some stuff that I brainstormed during writing the essay) and I even resent the file with an another email. I hope you can receive that and the second email does not count as a task 2, does it? I just need correction on my second email. I’m really worried right now. Thanks.
No worries. I saw your emails. I will only count it as one task.
Sir wanted to avail correction services… Kindly share package details and services included in that.
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This is just a rough estimate of your score with a few quick comments:
overall, 7.5
Cohesion and coherence, Vocabulary, and grammar are easily good enough to be 8
task response is not great due to not all of your main ideas being fully developed and that leads to 7.
1. The conclusion should actually summarise all the points from the body of your essay
2. Paragraph 2 and 3 have 3 main points and I believe two main ideas for each question is ideal. For the second and third lines you haven’t really mentioned a lot and I suggest you just have two ideas that are more fully developed. Ideas can be developed through explanations and examples
3. “would be” in paragraph 3 seems quite repetitive and I feel it’s better to write and present simple tense. “Another feasible solution would be chatting to neighbours”could be written as “another way is to chat with neighbours”
Dear Mike Wattie,
I sent three essays two days ago. Is it possible to check if they are in your spam folder?
Thank you in advance.
I haven’t received any tasks from you since April
I just sent you an email. I suggest you can reply to that email with your task
Thank you very much for you kind and prompt reply.
Thanks to you, I could realize my mistake; I sent messages to @ieltsanswer.com, instead of *answer”s”.com.
I will ask you corrections via correct e-mail address, examiner@wordpress-980111-3436014.cloudwaysapps.com, since your profession is what I really need. 🙂
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Hello, I would like to ask for a quick feedback and the band score for task 2 of test 15-4 before purchasing your service.
Thank you in advance!
Question:
In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
Answer:
Giving a message to children that they can reach their goal if they try their best has some upsides and downsides. In the best case, it can boost their confidence and help them to develop an optimistic personality. However, sometimes, this strong message can operate as pressure on children and ironically make them less confident due to unexpected results.
One advantage of giving positive messages to children is that it often helps children grow their confidence. Since confidence is one of the major contributing factors to success, some children can actually get the ideal outcome. For instance, the one who has achieved something will gain more power to believe in him/herself and this will lead to another success. Also, a positive way of thinking like the message above often leads to the development of an optimistic personality which is good for mental health. Children who can think and view things with brighter viewpoints tend to gain less stress and concerns which eventually prevents them from various mental disorders such as anxiety and depression.
Nevertheless, this is not the case all the time since there is a possibility that children might take this kind of message as pressure. Emphasizing ‘trying hard’ can make them feel that they have to do something much beyond their limitation and this could result in loss of motivation due to the burn-out. Actually, lots of my friends who have low motivation for studying have a commonality that their parents have extremely pushed them to do their best over their capability in their childhood. Another possible disadvantage is that unwanted outcomes might eventually lower their confidence. The fact that they failed even though they tried their best can make them less confident and this can be connected to the huge fear of challenging for the upcoming tasks in the future.
To conclude, the message encouraging kids that they can get ideal results when they work hard might help them build high confidence and optimistic characteristics. However, there are downsides as well such as results like low motivation and confidence in some cases.
1. Upsides and downsides is low-level informal language and it’s better to write “merits and drawbacks”
2. Kids is informal and should be replaced with children/youngsters/young people
3. With paragraph 2 you introduce one of two main ideas in your first sentence and instead it would be better to write a more general topic sentence “there are two main merits with giving children this message”
after a quick read I guess this is around a band seven or higher. If you use my writing correction service I will give you an accurate score for each of the four criteria and a lot more feedback:
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Jessie and yijun I have already done lots of free corrections for you. Thanks so much for the opportunity but I would prefer to not do any more.
Hi, Mike. I would like to kindly ask for the band score and some quick feedbacks for the answers of task 2.
Since I have no idea what is the rough band score of my answers and I am not really aware of which part I should focus on improving (grammar, sentence structure…), it would be really helpful if you could just give me some short comments.
As there is no one to give me any feedback around me and I have a test next week, I am really anxious at this point…
I know that four answers are a lot, but could you please give a rough band score and feedback on them (where I should focus on) when you have some spare time?
Thank you so much.
Q1. (Cambridge16 test 2)
In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way.
Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
A1. Brands that are advertising their products often highlight their unique selling point these days. This is because they want to differentiate their goods with other companies’ in the extremely competitive market and to draw the public’s attention. However, I think this phenomenon is not ideal as products that are not exactly the same with the advertisement often result in huge disappointment and less purchase most of the time.
Corporates normally stress how their merchandise is different from other brands to catch consumer’s eyes by emphasizing their special points in the advertisements. Since there are tons of similar goods being advertised through social media these days, unusual traits might be appealing to the consumers, eventually being connected to actual purchase. Indeed, lots of people tend to immediately skip the boring and normal advertisements in Youtube, while tend to watch extraordinary one until the end of it and even click buttons for additional information.
However, I believe this kind of strategy might often cause negative consequences for companies as it might disappoint consumers with the products that do not align with the advertisement. To survive in the highly competitive market, increasing companies tend to only focus on showing unique characteristics to draw attention without actually developing the quality of their products nowadays. In this case, people who actually bought a new digital watch expecting the wow point that was covered in the advertisement, for instance, might not be able to relate at all and this will eventually lead to decreased re-purchase and negative reviews.
To conclude, lots of corporations concentrate on advertising special parts of their manufactures to get more spotlight in the market where lots of the same things are being produced. Nevertheless, I believe the products that are not perfectly parallel with the commercials might cause an adverse effect by giving actual buyers a negative impression of both products and brands such as exaggeration and frauds.
Q2. (Cambridge 16 test 1)
In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in.
What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?
A2. An increasing number of people are caring about the information about what their place used to be in the past in some nations. People tend to get curious about the history as they simply feel more value and affections to their own house by doing this or want to reveal the unknown accidents that were not informed by the real estate agency. There are two main ways to explore this, asking the elderly neighbors around or finding publications from the local library.
Some residents try to examine the history of their property just to be more aware of its value and to treat it more carefully. It is true that the more you get to know about your own building, the more you feel affectionate about it. For instance, you might feel that the value of your house is even higher once you hear that a famous celebrity has lived there for 5 years in the past. Also, some people are willing to explore the past to figure out if there have been unrevealed incidents in the building. Since the real estate agency feels reluctant to disclose this kind of information, most of the time, they tend to hide the negative news to potential residents. Therefore, in Japan, for example, people actively use a certain website to check the history of buildings to see if there have been cases such as suicides or murders.
This research can be done in several ways, and one of them is to ask the neighborhood that has lived nearby for a long time. Since they have spent more time living there, they must know more about the building itself or the stories surrounding it. For instance, participating in community activities or gatherings of building residents might be helpful to meet people who lived longer and hear interesting news that is not revealed to the public. In addition, another way is to find some sources in the local library. The recent history of the house will be easily found on the website, however, it will be hard to find some old stories online since those are not recorded. Therefore, by looking for old publications and newspapers in the past in the library of your town, it might be possible to explore some unknown stories about your house.
To conclude, people want to look for the old stories of the property to better recognize its value or to find out the negative incidents that they were not aware of. By asking the residents who have lived in the building longer or doing research using old publications, people will be able to get to know the interesting history of their house.
Q3. (Cambridge 15 test 3)
Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
A3. Some argue that advertisements definitely help convince consumers to purchase things and some disagree with this suggesting that people do not care much about them since there is nothing unique about it these days. However, I believe that advertising absolutely makes people feel a strong desire to buy something.
There are people who believe advertisements successfully lead us to the actual purchase. Changing trends such as advertising through influencers have made consumers easily relate themselves to influencers in daily life and made them want to copy what they are purchasing. Indeed, marketing strategies these days for various products like accessories, diet foods, and beauty products are more focused on advertisements especially actively utilizing influencers due to its enormous effects.
On the other hand, some do not agree about this as they think there is nothing special about advertising that drags the public’s attention. Since there are so many advertisements on similar products these days, some people do not find them interesting at all and perceive watching them as a waste of time. For instance, we can easily see people who just skip the advertisements in the Youtube video or immediately switch the TV channel once it starts as they are sick and tired of commercial advertisements.
To conclude, some people might not believe the strength of advertisement as they think it is not appealing anymore, however, I completely disagree with them. In my opinion, advertising still succeeds to move consumers’ minds as it is evolving every day with diverse marketing analyses. More and more people tend to feel closer to the celebrities in social media compared to the past and this actually leads them to buy more products to follow their lifestyles.
Q4. (Cambridge 15 test 2)
In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers of books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
A4. These days, lots of people read newspapers or books online and these kinds of online subscription services are rapidly expanding throughout the world. Some people suggest that printed versions of newspapers and books will be completely replaced by online ones since no one would purchase the printed ones in the future. However, I totally disagree with this and believe that there still is a possibility that people find the printed one on-site even though they are well aware of these convenient services on websites.
Some say that people in the future will not buy paper versions of newspapers or publications as they can access them online without paying money. Due to the convenience that you do not have to visit somewhere to buy publications or have to bring heavy books every time, the number of people who subscribe to newspapers or books online is increasing day by day. Since people can access the news or books anytime and anywhere, for example in the subway on their way home, by just clicking a few times on their smartphone or tablet, they do not feel the necessity of purchasing them offline and more of them will do so in the near future.
However, this is not true for everyone. Despite the convenience of technology development, there have always been people who stick to the analog one throughout history and there will be some in the future. The elderly will account for most of them as they are unfamiliar with how to use the new services or they do not possess digital devices. They might even feel more inconvenient when using it compared to the previous one. Not only the elderly, people from other generations who value the hardcover more than the online one will still purchase books visiting bookstores or libraries in the local town to feel the cozy and relaxing atmosphere there.
To conclude, I completely disagree with the opinion that no one will buy printed materials in the future and strongly believe that some people will still be willing to purchase newspapers or books offline despite the rapid surge of online subscription services. In my opinion, even though they are aware of the convenience of online services, there always will be the ones who get back to analog publications due to the unexpected inconvenience or to find some kind of nostalgic atmosphere that can only be felt in the hardcover and offline places.
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I am well aware that you have a lots of things going on and deeply appreciate your feedback on task 1.
However, since I only have got quick feedbacks on task 1, I really would like to know what would be the rough band score of my task 2 answers before registering for your service.
Could you please let me know the band score at least for the first two answers?
Thank you so much.
Sorry, I do not have time to do it.
I know it sounds easy but it takes time to accurately assess 2 tasks and I
do not wish to do it inaccurately.
Thank you for your help with my essays! I definitely will recommend your website to my friends!
Thanks, so much. I am glad you found it beneficial.
Hi, Mike. I’m interested in your writing correction service. I have two questions. Firstly, I wonder there is an expiration date. Secondly, if I send part 1 & part 2 at once, is it counted as two tasks? Thanks
There is no expiry date.
part 1 & part 2 = TWO tasks
Hi Mike. I sent you the payment and my task 2 response yesterday. Just wanted to make sure you received them both and the email wasn’t marked as spam.
Thanks, you should have received your task back now.
Hi Mike, I am a little confused about your Writing task 1 fixed structure, why do you add up the introduction and overview part into 1 paragraph? And should I do it in my actual tests? Thanks
It makes one solid paragraph instead of two “thin” ones. It is not a requirement and it is just something I
recommend.
Do you still receive the writing? Thanks.
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Hi, I purchased the 10 writing tasks about several days ago. Do you set any specific titles for the emails that I send to you? Thanks.
Please choose your own tasks or any from the ones I wrote model answers:
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Hi Mike
I have paid to have an essay corrected by you, and I have just sent it to your email. Please let me know if you have seen it.
Hope to receive feedback from you soon
Thanks, I have received your task.
Some people say that in our modern age, it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Humans have thoughts. Thoughts have to come out through speaking or writing. We have been doing these two activities since time immemorial. The use of the mouth has remained very well recognized throughout for speaking. Nonetheless, writing by hand has been losing its importance with the arrival of typing. As a consequence, a few individuals now put forth that teaching the art of writing by hand to our young ones is redundant. This essay opposes such individuals on this viewpoint.
To begin with, textual aids are digital, and technology is unreliable. That is to say, when we have to convey thoughts, we use digital resources. These resources include emails and social media. However, such resources can go out. They are reliant on various parameters, for instance, electricity, network, and battery power. If any of these malfunctions, we are unable to write our thoughts. On the other hand, if a person knows how to write in pen or pencil, he just needs a piece of paper.
Similarly, more virtual writing means greater exposure to screens. Thus, if the young are solely reliant on technological devices for written communication, they may impair their vision. To illustrate, many children in my knowledge have gotten spectacles owing to online education in the COVID pandemic. Hence, children need to commit things to paper so as to be able to have proper eyesight.
In conclusion, digitalization has given us many tools for writing our thoughts. Even so, handwriting remains an essential life skill. As explained above, this is owing to the fact that digital tools are not as dependable as handwriting. In addition to that, vision-wise, they are not healthy. Consequently, for a secure future of the upcoming adults, we should equip them with the art of handwriting now.
Do you still receive the writing? Thanks.
Yes sure
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Hello Mike, is there an option to avail writing correction service for two tasks, like the Task 1 and Task 2?
Yes, select the one task option and then change the quantity to 2.
Book 15 TEST 2
Topic: In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
IELTS WRITING TASK 2:
ANSWER:
Many people believe that, in coming years everything will be online. People will not go to stores to buy printed materials such as books, novels and newspaper. Because, they will be able to get it online without any charges. I tend to agree with this opinion and in this essay i will give support my opinion with examples.
The main reason why I agree is because the world has becoming digital every single day. People spend most of their time online. There are plenty of online websites available where you can go and read your favourite story and book quite easily, In the future people will not go to different stores to buy printed material such as books and newsletter. They will rather sit their home and search online and read whatever they want without paying a single penny.
Another main reason why I believe printed material will not be so popular in the future is because of several free online books store. Where people can simple search their favourite outlet and read it on their PC or mobile. Furthermore, people can also download any of them with totally free and save it to their PC.
On the other hand, there is always some people who will prefer printed material rather than online. Because printed books will give them more pleasurable experience than reading on electronic gadget. For instance, many people find it easier to read on book then a screen
In short, I completely agree that there will be a time when people will no longer buy books and newspaper. This is because I believe people look for some easy ways such as online stores and websites in order to read books and up to date.
Sir please examine my writing and let me know where i am standing in ielts writing
The main issue is that you contradict your opinion “completely agree there will be a time” .. With “there is always some people who will prefer printed material rather than online.” . There is a fair few issues with grammar. I think you’re around about a 6 to 6.5 level from just a quick glance. If you want to know more details I have an editing service: http://www.ieltsanswers.com/writing-correction-ielts.html
Hi Mike,
I did IELTS exam for the 6th time and I received my result yesterday.
Writing 6.5, Speaking 7, Listening 7.5, Reading 7.5.
I need each band 7 and I always get 6.5 in writing. I am so stressed with my situation.
I already booked my next test and it is on 21 August 2021.
Can you please let me know how I can pay for your correction service?
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I’d like to use your writing correction service but my currency is different from yours. How can I send you money ?
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Hello Mike
I hope you are in good health, I sent my essays to this email (mike@wordpress-980111-3436014.cloudwaysapps.com) according to your offer if you buy a book I will correct one essay, please provide me with feedback until make some changes and take the test soon
Thank you
Thanks Mohammad , you should have your essay back now.
I had availed Mike’s writing correction services in preparation for my IELTS exam. Although I was fairly confident in other areas, I needed a lot of help with writing. Thanks to his constructive/actionable feedback and keen attention to detail, I scored 7.5 in writing and 8.5 in speaking. I would strongly recommend for Mike’s writing correction services to anyone who is looking to boost their writing scores.
Thanks a bunch Sriram for taking the time to comment. Congratulations on getting the score you need.
Hi Mike,
Please give me some quick comments on my essay and an estimated band score, so I can use your correction service for further essays. Thanks.
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QUESTION: Some people think that a person should change a career at least once, while others think that it is better to stay in one job for a lifetime.
What is your opinion?
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Opinions are divided as to whether a person should change jobs or keep doing the same one for his whole life. Both of the career paths mentioned above have their own merits, but from my point of view, people should seek variety and experience through a change of career early in their working life.
On the one hand, in some jobs, holding down a permanent job may offer employees a host of opportunities for career advancement. More specificially, persisting in one job means that we can accumulate experience in a particular field, thereby working more effectively and gaining achievements. For instance, a language teacher can only teach her students efficiently when she has spent years improving her teaching methods and knowing how to motivate her students. In some jobs, such as teachers and scientists, which require a high level of professional expertise, the number of working years determine how successful they may become.
However, I strongly believe that employees should be involved in multiple jobs before setting down in a job later in life. The reason for this argument is that doing many jobs means gaining abundant experience in diverse fields, which may come in handy when that person works in a particular one. An example of this is that a salesman in technology field may benefit from a period of working as a computer technician, because he can make full use of his technical experience to consult his customers and increase his sale record. It’s worth noting that this career move should only made when a person is young, say in his 20s, so experience in different fields is necessary to help him decide what suits him best to settle down later.
In conclusion, it is up to personal choice whether a career change is made or not. Personally, I maintain that each of us should experience different fields in the initial period of their working life in order to decide what career we should pursue later.
1. Paragraph 2 does not fit with the opinion you gave in the introduction or conclusion. You are asked for YOUR opinion. Other people’s opinions are only needed if the question is “discuss both views and give your opinion ”
2 is you use “On the one hand,” …the next paragraph starts with “on the other hand”
3. The conclusion needs to summarise all main points and you missed ou “gaining abundant experience in diverse fields”
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Listing – 8.5
Reading -8.5
Speaking-7.5
Writing -7
Thanks for taking the time to comment. Congratulations on your score and overcoming the IELTS test.
Hi Mr. Mike
I sent you my essay yesterday (titled: Trang Task 1). My email: nguyenquynh.trang14121@gmail.com. Have you received it?
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Hi Mike
I purchased your writing correction service (4 essays) and sent you my first essay yesterday. I was wondering if you have received it?
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Hi, when can I get the feedback? I sent 2 tasks in one google doc by email. Thanks.
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Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages,, while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Although it may be unlikely to say, there are currently over 500 existing languages and many of which are on the verge of extinction. It has also become arguable whether money should be spent to protect these languages. This essay discusses both sides of the matter and I will give my perspective after that.
On the one hand, to seek finances to conserve the endangered languages has many positive points. First off, I believe that languages is a part of the cultural identity, from the dawn of human’s history, all tribes were able to create the own languages for themselves . So by protecting the languages from going extinct, people are maintaining an inevitable elements of their history and indirectly showing their respect to the previous generations. Moreover, it is one of the ways to contribute to the diversity of languages globally, the diversity of languages provide data for experts to keep making for linguistic study and publicize useful knowledge.
On a totally opposite side, there are individuals ho voice that it is better not to spend cash on such protection. Too many languages will make our communication harder, everybody nowadays ant to learn English to talk to each other, so what is the exact point of keeping any languages alive and confuse us. Another reason is that those money can be invested in other fields, such as road infrastructures, helping the poor, etc. Many more serious problems are in need of proper solutions.
In conclusion, while both arguments can be explained in different ways, I believe that we should spend money to conserve the dying-out languages because it has a special association with our life and our history.
I only had a quick read. It seems like around band 6.5
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Can you briefly go over my mistakes? just briefly since i really want to know my flaws.
I’ve corrected the introduction for you… If you want me to look at anything else use my correction service
Here is my version of your introduction:
Although it may seem unlikely, there are currently over 500 languages in the world and many of which are on the verge of extinction. There is a lack of consensus over whether money should be spent to protect these languages or not. This essay discusses both sides of the matter and then I will give my perspective.
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I briefly checked your website, would like to use this service so I payed.
Please let us know if I should pick up any themes on your ebooks or I can pick up any random topics from IELTS mock test or any website?
You are welcome to pick your own task, but try to get reliable ones. Cambridge books of past test papers are a good source.
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Thanks, I have your tasks. I will get them back to you soon.
Hi Teacher, I will enroll to the 4 or 10 essays correction package. May send you one by one, so I can use your tips to improve in the following days? Thanks, Adriana
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Yesterday I sent you my writing tasks and I am wondering whether you received them or not. My email:danasagadiyeva@gmail.com
YOu should have your essay back now. Let me know if this is not the case.
Dear Mr. Mike,
I did the payment and sent you my task yesterday, i hope you received it.
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I just sent your essay now
Hello Mr. Mike
I sent you my third task, please check if you received it.
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Dear Sir,
I received my result today.
reading -9
speaking -7.5
writing -6.5
listening -6.5
Thank you for your valuable support and guidance. However, I have to retake exam as I need to get each band 7.
Hi Janaka, If not for the listening score I would suggest you go for a recount on the writing.
Keep up the study and take another test as you are very close to your goal.
Sir, Thank you very much for your motivation.
Dear Mr. Mike,
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I have send an essay from eldhogeorge68@gmail.com and the payment receipt yesterday. I hope you received the email and the payment. It could be really helpful if you acknowledge the email
Thanks yes I have got your task and I’ll send it later on today.
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Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
What spare time is spent away from work, chores; education and vital activities such as sleeping. Some individuals affirm that utilising free time for activities which can contribute to enhance the mind is indispensable whilst others assume that significant is to rest mind during leisure time. What the best way of evaluation of leisure time is the “KAHVUYKU” method, which gives us the opportunity of mixing both opinions is my personal assurance.
On the one hand, to spend leisure time logically with beneficial activities such as playing chess or solving sudoku is one of keys of success, the reason why many confirm the argument that leisure time should be spent for these sorts of activities. The studies mirror that acute people such as scientists spend their leisure time on reading or researching. In addition, because of accelerating technology, today requires more brilliant brains and spending leisure time on these types of actions may be the most appropriate way in order to boost brains. It is possible to enjoy and to refresh whilst upgrading your brain.
On the other hand, resting your mind can cause more adequate recharging. The more we doze, the more adenosine is cleaned from neurons, which makes us more enthusiastic to work. What is more, working without rest can cause baffling, the reason why there are breaks amongst lessons.
My personal notion is that the best method is “KAHVUYKU”: after midday, drinking half cup of coffee and sleeping approximately 23 minutes lead to clean all adenosine from receptors and are connected caffeine with receptors as fake adenosine. Adenosine makes us tired by absorbing energy; howbeit, caffeine both do not absorb energy and hinders receptors from connecting with adenosine. Thus, “KAHVUYKU” both makes us more nimble and prolongs our work qualities.
To sum up, people have diverse viewpoints about whether leisure time should be spent on enhancing the brain or resting; notwithstanding I guess, mixing both options by “KAHVUYKU” is the most proper method. I predict, provided that everyone uses this method, qualities of work are estimated to be better.
Please, check this essay.
some quick comments
1, “KAHVUYKU” method… This should not be written in quotation marks and probably should not be written capitalised
2. I have no idea what the “KAHVUYKU” method is… You’ve mentioned too often! When I read it in the introduction I have absolutely no idea of what it is… Later you seem to be providing what could possibly be some sort of definition for it… I need to know what the word means in the introduction… I suggest just getting rid of this word it’s probably not English is probably Russian and you shouldn’t start writing Russian and your essays.
3. The last sentence of the introduction needs to introduce what the essay is about… Something like “this essay discusses both sides of this argument and why I believe that it’s best to…”
4. The word baffling doesn’t seem to have been used correctly
hi Mike,
can you evaluate the above essay as i want to buy your correction service for further essays.
Nowadays it is common that people are complain about deprived of sleep. There are numerous reasons for this. Most people facing this due to increasing levels of stress and cutting-edge internet era. we can solve this issue by doing regular physical activities and follow routine to go to bed.
One reason is, in recent competitive world, employees of organisation are getting unrealistic deadlines and employer is expecting productivity from day one. The end target date is fixed irrespective of changing requirements. Organisations are committing to clients for delivery of product for which employees need to fulfil it. Employees need to stretch further to adhere deadlines which leads to so much of stress levels. The poor company environment also one of the reasons for stress. For example, the criticism made by boss if work is not completed on time or any solidarity is missing between staff cause stress. The other reason is because of recent internet trends, people are more inclined to entertainment than before. They are not following one fixed time to go to bed regularly by watching movies or playing games in Television late night. For instance, If new movie or web series released in Netflix, they would not sleep until watched it, because of this, It disturbs the sleeping patterns and when they go to bed, it is not easy to go into deep sleep with irregular sleeping patterns.
One solution to overcome this problem is, public must do the physical exercises regularly without fail. Companies should amend some policy by encouraging staff like come early and leave early so that staff can get extra time to do outdoor activities whichever they like. People should habituate to one regular time to go to bed and follow one rule like early to bed and early to rise. They can put some restrictions like before going to bed they would not touch any gadgets which can improve their sleeping quality. The other solution is that public need to follow some healthy lifestyle such as doing yoga, meditation and avoid of bad habits like smoking and drinking.
In conclusion, even though, we cannot avoid stress at work due to current competition world, we can overcome lack of sleep by doing outdoor activities, maintain healthy lifestyle and restricting us to gadgets to some extent.
I had a very quick skim read. You’ll have to use my writing correction service if you want complete feedback. It’s about a band seven and I have the following suggestions
1. you can replace the last three sentences of the introduction with “This essay discusses the causes of this issue and some ways to address them“
2. since body paragraphs have two main ideas in them you should start with a more general topic sentence “There are a number of causes of this issue” However, there are some ways to tackle this“
3. The first cause seems to be stress and explain quite well why stress occurs… What you don’t do is explain why stress causes people to not get to sleep
4. The solution about people going to bed at regular times is not great… It’s not happening now so you need to explain how it could happen in the future… Perhaps you could mention that the government needs to use public service advertising to educate people about the need for this… My point is that just saying that people should do it is not enough because there are already not doing it so you’re not providing a solution!
Hi Mike, I have sent my tasks and paid.
I opted for your writing corrective services and they really helped me with the writing part. The evaluations were honest and extremely critical and it actually helped me with all the writing scoring criteria. I was stuck at 6.5 and finally I got my required band 7.
Thank Noor, and well done on passing your test!
Hi Mike, I just sent you my two tasks , and i have paid.
Thanks, I have it and will get it back to you today.
could you please rate my essay and suggest where I should improve?
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
You should write at least 250 words.
Answer
Social media has in recent times gained incalculably in popularity as an alternative to face-to-face communication. But this trend is not without its problems and the essay is aimed at putting the utilization of social media into perspective.
One the one hand, it is true that social media is altering the way we communicate with one another to a large extent. In contrast to the past when communication between individuals was slow and inefficient, we can today get in touch with anybody no matter how far away they are in the blink of an eye via social networks such as Facebook and Zalo. Besides, the advent of social media is also revolutionizing the manner in which work is performed. Meetings and conferences can now be conducted entirely online through innovative applications like Zoom.
On the other hand, there are certain problems that accompany the dominance of social media over conventional interaction. The most worrying problem is related to our health which seems to be adversely affected by social media. To be more specific, when an individual spends a large amount of his time chatting with his friends or working online, he will likely develop negative symptoms such as dizziness and eyestrain. He might also fall into a sedentary lifestyle and fight shy of partaking outdoor activities. The effect of this would probably be tremendous deterioration in his health.
In conclusion, I acknowledge that social media has benefited us immeasurably, especially in terms of communication. Needless to say, every coin has two sides and so does social media. Several health problems may stem from it, but on the whole, it is such a useful tool that we should never give it a miss.
I just read the introduction… Your introduction needs to be introducing your opinion about whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages… And not as you say “putting social media into perspective” … I’m happy to give you feedback but you need to follow the instructions here: http://www.ieltsanswers.com/writing-correction-ielts.html
Hi Mr Mike,
I’m having this question in my mind, could you please give me your answer?
About writing task 2 questions “agree or disagree”, can I write about both sides of view, then i give my opinion?
I don’t know it is suitable or not because the way I answer would be the same as the “discuss both sides and give your opinion” type. The reason I want to write about both sides is that I will have more ideas, and can expand my essay longer in case my ideas about 1 side may be too short. Thank you.
No! You are only asked for YOUR opinion. Stick to that.
All you need is TWO main ideas. YOu get rewarded for DEVELOPING main ideas
and so you should learn how to do this. Develop ideas by
1. explaining them
2. adding details
3. giving examples that illustrate them
To see how to develop ideas look at my model essays in the pdf you can download for free here:
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I’m thankful for your feedback and helpful advices.
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It’s better to analyse your mistakes rather to attend another IELTS exam.
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I have been following you for a long time. I have changed the way I write after reading your book”how to pass your IELTS test”. Great stuff by the way. I am now considering to buy the correction service. Can you please evaluate this and let me know how the feedback will be. Thanks a ton in advance and keep making YouTube videos and awesome content.
Some people think that it is better for a country’s economy for people to spend money while others believe that it would be a better for people to save money. Discuss both sides and Give your opinion.
There are those who have the belief that a country witnesses financial prosperity if its citizens spend their money, while the alternative stance is that if citizens gather up money instead of spending it, then it will be beneficial for the country’s economy. This essay discuss both sides of this contentious argument and then, I will give my own perspective.
On the one hand, some claim that it is essential for a nation’s financial growth that its people spend enough money in purchasing goods and services as it helps the nation to have more monetory funds. For instance, consumers pay huge taxes while purchasing any products or services such as cars, electronic devices and grooming assistance. The governments use this taxpayer’s money to build new industries, jobs and superior infrastructure that paves the way to the countries’ success.
On the other hand, others argue that individuals should spend their money more wisely so that they can save it for their future and improve their financial statements. First of all, it enables countries to have more rich citizens and reduces poverty. Additionally, the governments have to pay less in maintaining the welfare of inhabitants. For instance, if a person is financially well, he will be able to provide his family with all rudimentary needs such as shelter, an improved health care system and education. Thus, it helps the nation to save a lot of money which would have gone otherwise in providing several subsidies and monetory help to its people.
In conclusion, after analyzing the both opposite camps, I opine that it imperative for people to save their hard earned money as it not only enables them to maintain a better financial status but also provides financial gain to the country by minimizing poverty and saving its money.
This is a really well-written essay. You should be able to get at least 7.5 and possibly eight for it.
you respond to the question well
an appropriate structure is used throughout
there are only a few minor errors with word choices [I have put these in bold in your original essay]
Grammar is excellent
Hello, if I choose the order of 4 essays, is there be a specific time timit between essays? I plan to send one for correction every week or 10 days so that I can have time for improvement. Thank you
Hi Yara, There is no time limit to send your tasks.
Hi Mike, I sent my writing. Hope to get your feedback! Thank you,
Hi Yuri,
If you do not have your task back already can you please resend it. I am not sure if I have it.
Hello, Mike
I purchased your writing service and I am thankful for your feedback and hoping that i can improve
I would like to know if this writing correction is just for essays or it can be for reports too? (diagrams, graphs…)
Also, if once I’ve payed for your speaking offer, it’s just one lesson or it will be a continuous lessons?
You can choose to send any combination of essays and reports, but please note that each one counts as a task.
SO if you send a task-1 and a task-2 it means two tasks.
With the mock speaking test. I give you a mock speaking test with a score and feedback. The payment is for 1 mock test.
Hey Mike,
I have been following your YouTube channel and I have improved a lot, I guess. I am thinking of buying the service before the exam. Can you please let me know what would the service be like. I wrote this essay in 45 minutes. what would be the band on this.
Question: Some people think that the only way to have success in business is to have a unique product. What factors do you think influence the success of a company?
Answer: Manufacturing an innovate product plays a vital role in a company’s success. However, in my opinion, there are other crucial factors as well that contribute to an enterprise’s success and this essay discusses those factors with relevant examples.
To begin with, one of the most important parameters that ensures the firm’s success is the quality of their product. The product they are selling must be passed on all the quality standards. For instance, it is essential for a car manufacturer to test its car on all the security measures such as durability or proper functioning of airbags or brakes. Moreover, their product should be fit for use and serve its purpose. To exemplify, if a voice recorder software is not recognizing its user’s voice, it will definitely not sustain in the market. Thus, quality is an imperative aspect that brings more customers and generates a good revenue for the organizations.
In addition to this, success of any business depends on its workforce. A motivated and passionate team is the backbone of a company. If employees are motivated they show perseverance in their work. For instance, if the morale of an employee is high, he works over and above to support his employer. Their enthusiasm and diligence bring out the best item on the table that paves the way to their company’s success and achievements.
In conclusion, I would like to reiterate my strong belief that quality of the product or services and an encouraged team are the ones that enable businesses to reach to the new heights.
The task instructions seem unlikely. The first sentence suggest the question will be your opinion.
Still you wrote a great response 7-8 for each of the criteria. The two factors you gave were highly relevant you
developed them well
Hi Mike,
I have share my letter for correction. Could you please share the feedback for the same.
Hi, Mike.
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When would be expire the service?
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Question: In many countries more and more young people are leaving school but unable to find jobs. What problems do you think youth unemployment causes for individuals and the society? What measures Should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among youngsters?
Answer: It has been observed in several countries that increasing number of school passouts are facing difficulty to grab job opportunities. This essay discusses its adversarial impacts on them as well as on the society, and suggests the plausible solutions that government should take to mitigate the issue.
The major impact this burgeoning issue has on individuals is the mental stress and their involvement in crime. First of all, when the youngsters cannot find employment for themselves, they have to undergo a lot of parental pressure that can be detrimental to their mental health. Moreover, they are more likely to involve in illegal activities such as robberies or drug abuse. Youth unemployment also affects the society by slowing down the economical growth. The young generation contributes to nation’s economy by paying taxes through their jobs and by carrying out crucial inventions and research for the country and, hence, their unemployment will certainly has negative impact on country’s welfare. To exemplify, most African countries has high unemployment rate due to which they have overwhelming juvenile delinquency and young suicidal cases. Moreover, these countries has extremely poor financial status because of it.
There are several ways that government should tackle this concerning issue. Firstly, they can open small-scale industries or factories to generate employment for the youth. In addition to this, they can provide them monthly incentives which they can utilize to fulfill their rudimentary needs. To illustrate, in 2012 Indian government opened a myriad of small-scale businesses such as small IT firms and handloom factories to provide employment to its jobless young population.
In conclusion, it is evident that unemployment of the young people not only leaves them in anguish and attracts them towards crime, but also affects economy of the whole community. Therefore, government needs to intervene with forth some plausible reforms such as opening low-scale businesses and providing them financial help to resolve these issues.
Please note that I make more effort when I get paid to do corrections and that this feedback may be a bit rough. I am sending it to you by email.
Can I send one by one if I take a package?
Thanks
Hi Mike
Are you still working, nowadays?
Yes, sure! Welcome to send me work.
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Question:
【【【We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in businesses, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used for in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we he more auspicious of their benefits?】】】
Computers have been widely used in many different areas. While we benefit from the convenience they brought us and actively seek for other ways computer programmes may help us in the future, the possible disadvantages of our growing dependence on them should not be ignored.
It is conceivable that computers will become involved in more occupations. In the legal sector, for instance, routine jobs such as contract drafting can be computer-aided. Programmes are able to generate legal documents much faster than people do, as they can apply templates and search for appropriate legal references from the database or the internet within seconds. In addition, computer-controlled systems may be commonly applied to motor vehicles, such as cars, buses and trains. This does not only save your time for travelling as computer-controlled cars will follow the quickest route without misreading the GPS map and losing its direction, but also prevents accidents caused by driving under the influence of alcohol or fatigue.
We definitely expect computers to further benefit our lives, but the risks of our increasing reliance on computers are alarming. We all have had the experience of programme crashing when documents had not been saved. This may evolve into a more serious problem when crucial missions are handed to them. Imagine an unmanned bus driven by a computer goes out of control due to an unexpected error occurring in the system, an unavoidable car crash will take away many people’s lives because computers are unable to handle unpredicted events. Whereas a driver, in this situation, might be able to quickly come up with a strategy based on his or her driving experience, thus minimizes the damage.
Computers have offered us a myriad of benefits. However, it is important that we find the right balance as to how much they should intervene human lives. People should stay conscious and take the worst scenario into consideration before we become further dependent on computers.
Question:
【【【We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in businesses, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes.
What things will they be used for in the future?
Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we he more suspicious of their benefits?】】】
Computers have been widely used in many different areas. While we benefit from the convenience they brought us and actively seek for other ways computer programmes may help us in the future, the possible disadvantages of our growing dependence on them should not be ignored.
[THE LAST SENTENCE OF YOUR INTRODUCTION NEEDS TO TELL THE READER WHAT THE ESSAY IS ABOUT = TWO QUESTIONS YOU GOING TO BE RESPONDING TO:
“THIS ESSAY DISCUSSES WAYS COMPUTERS WILL BE USED IN THE DAYS TO COME AND WHETHER DEPENDENCE ON COMPUTING TECHNOLOGY IS BENEFICIAL OR NOT”]
[THE FIRST SENTENCE OF THE PARAGRAPH NEEDS TO INTRODUCE WHAT THE PARAGRAPH IS ABOUT TO THE READER. THIS IS TO RESPOND TO QUESTION ONE: “COMPUTERS ARE LIKELY TO BE USED FOR A LOT OF NEW APPLICATIONS IN THE FUTURE”]
It is conceivable that computers will become involved in more occupations. In the legal sector, for instance, routine jobs such as contract drafting can be computer-aided. Programmes are able to generate legal documents much faster than people do, as they can apply templates and search for appropriate legal references from the database or the internet within seconds. In addition, computer-controlled systems may be commonly applied to motor vehicles, such as cars, buses and trains. This [does] not only saveS your time for travelling as computer-controlled cars will follow the quickest route without misreading the GPS map and losing its direction, but also prevents accidents caused by driving under the influence of alcohol or fatigue.
We definitely expect computers to further benefit our lives, but the risks of our increasing reliance on computers are alarming. We all have had the experience of A programme crashing when documents had not been saved. This may evolve into a more serious problem when crucial missions are handed to them. Imagine an unmanned bus driven by a computer [goes] GOING out of control due to an unexpected error occurring in the system, an unavoidable car crash will take away many people’s lives because computers are unable to handle unpredicted events. Whereas a driver, in this situation, might be able to quickly come up with a strategy based on his or her driving experience, thus minimizes the damage.
[PRESUMABLY THIS IS YOUR CONCLUDING PARAGRAPH AND CONCLUDING PARAGRAPHS NEED TO BE SIGNALLED TO THE READER WITH A PHRASE LIKE “IN CONCLUSION”]
Computers [have offered] WILL OFFER us a myriad of benefits. However, it is important that we find the right balance as to how much they should intervene IN human lives. People should stay conscious and take the worst scenario into consideration before we become further dependent on computers.
OVERALL 6.5
TR 6: you’ve mentioned there are risks and benefits be haven’t made it clear your response to the question regarding whether they’re beneficial or not…. Maybe you could state whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages or not
CC: 6 and lots of places you need to signal the reader regarding what things are about…. What the essay is about what the paragraph is about and when you’re starting your concluding paragraph
LR: 8
GRA 7
Hi, I have purchased 8 writing tasks correction. I notice that if I send you my practices of task 1 and task 2 in IELTS test will be counted as two correcting services, right? Can I start to write the email to you for asking the correction of my works?
Yes, task 1 and task 2 = two tasks [I spend about 20 minutes to correct one task]
I suggested you focus more on task-2 as it is worth 2/3rds of your score
Please start sending your tasks as soon as you are ready
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Question: The technology development has affected social relationships from person to person. Do the positive aspects of this trend outweigh the negative aspects?
Nowadays, the impacts of technology advancement on social connections have aroused public attention. Although the development of technology is not without detrimental effects, the upside would justify these.
An array of drawbacks can be taken into account the fact that technology can harm real life connections. To some extent, as tremendous advances in technology could trigger the lack of social interactions, it would be detrimental to relationships in real life. In fact, people nowadays, especially young generations, tend to devote a great deal of time to glue their eyes on computer’s screens or smartphones without having a face-to-face conversation, which potentially fractures the concrete relationships they have built up. Furthermore, the distraction caused by digital interactions could be blamed for deterioration in social relationships. Plenty of evidence suggests that frequent interruptions, namely checking phones or texting messages in the middle of a conversation, could result in conflicts. This consequently contributes to relationship degradation.
Nevertheless, the potential pitfalls of this trend can be overshadowed by some considerable advantages. One possible upside is that the proliferation of technology has made the communication among people more accessible. Users with electronic devices can, therefore, keep in touch with people at ease. In fact, they can have a conversation with others through a smartphone or a laptop, which can promote their social behavior and help them strengthen their social relationships. Another merit could be that people can seize the chances to expand their social circles by actively joining in social networks. This means that it is now possible for them to make friends around the globe regardless of geographical barriers, making them get socialized without inconveniences.
To sum up, it is widely acknowledged that human relationships can be affected by technology proliferation. While advances in technology do come with some adverse effects on social relationships, the plus points far eclipse the drawbacks.
On the whole, you wrote a really excellent essay and I guess you’re targeting eight. Only some fine-tuning is required.
1. This is probably 7.5 overall. I have only had a quick read of it.. the main thing that I don’t like is the task response. You haven’t done a great job of making it clear why the positive aspects outweigh the negative aspects.
2. I suggest you have two reasons for the side you support more strongly and only one for the side you support less strongly
3. You list the advantages and disadvantages but you don’t really make it clear why the advantages are stronger than the disadvantages… This could be done in the conclusion “the merits in terms of ease of communicating an ability to make new relationships outweigh the potential risks of social isolation “
4. on the whole the conclusion is quite weak and doesn’t make it clear why the plus points eclipse the drawbacks at all
5. you use lots of high-level language and errors are few and far between
“actively joining in social networks” = “actively joining social networks”
“plus points” = “positive points”
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I have sent my writing essay to you over email. Please evaluate at earliest since i have exam on day after tomorrow.
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Venkat.
Thanks, I have it and I will get it back to you as soon as I can.
Hi, I have a question. If I pay 30$ for 4 essays, do I have to send 4 essays at once? I haven’t finished 4 essays yet.
It is best to send them one at a time. The feedback from one task can help you to write the next one.
Hi Mike, I gave IELTS general exam twice.
1st attempt: L8 S8 R6 W6.5
2nd attempt: L8 S8 R6.5 W6
I am stuck at 6/ 6.5 for writing. 🙁 I work in a call center in Canada and my listening and speaking is good. I graduated with a Bachelors degree from Canada. However, I am getting very poor marks in writing and reading. Please suggest me which package I should buy to improve my writing. Do you think I should register for NOV 23 2019 exam or should I delay in resitting the exam? Please advise.
if you haven’t booked your test yet I would hold off and wait until the writing is under control. Another choice is to book ahead say a month’s time. I suggest you watch some of my writing videos and then start using my writing correction service.
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Hi Mike, purchased one essay evaluation and have sent you essay. You think i can get it today? i bit running against time. Probably will be sending you few more
I wonder if I can choose my own topics of GT Task 1 and Task 2?
Yes, sure. Just include the task instructions when you send your task.
Hi Mike I know you are busy with your day to day work, I would like to purchase your writing feedback but before I want to know what band score I am on.
Your reply would be truly appreciated
The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Going online and getting any information is now very easy, this truly has been a blessing for this century. The internet era is extremely useful to find and gain access to the information needed. However, there are many disadvantages to this development as well, which leads to procrastination and self-destruction.
A single touch of the mouse or the smart phone’s screen is enough to search for any useful information needed. The world is so big and any information or news can be gathered from other side of the world. For example, politics, technology and sports can be easily be discovered of another nation. Another big advantage is internet learning which has become quite popular in recent years. Individuals can find the best teachers from all around the world, who can teach them a special skill. For instance, one can learn on how to play a guitar by just staying at home and searching for the teacher that he/she likes.
Almost everything existing in this world has both sides the positive and negative. Its true that internet is truly a blessing for everyone in this planet. But, it has some negative aspects as well, access to bad websites and online threats and spams are increasing. One can easily be a prey to hackers and spammers, who steal data and money from the users. Access to adult websites are also very easy and teenagers get highly affected by this problem. For example, teenagers are always curious to know new things and internet advertisements and pop-ups can easily lead them to bad websites.
To conclude, internet is so useful in day to day life of people in finding information and also helping in developing skills and knowledge. However, there are disadvantages as well, young generation should be taught on cybersecurity, online threats and many other bad website that needs to be well tackled and avoided.
Everything is fine for getting to at least seven… Except for task response!
you have not responded to the question… You’re asked to what extent you think it’s a good thing
and you do not respond to this anywhere in your essay. All you have done is say that there are advantages and disadvantages but you need to say “to what extent you think it’s a good thing” = how much you think it’s good… I guess from what you’ve written you think that it is “somewhat advantageous”…you could clarify this by stating that the “advantages outweigh the disadvantage”. this sort of clarification is needed in the introduction and especially the conclusion.
Hi, Mike.
I appreciate you providing great IELTS learning contents.
I’m going to submit my essay.
Thank you in advance.
Thanks, I look forward to helping you.
Hi Mike
I submitted my writing task. I hope you received it. Thank you,
Yes, sure. You should have it back now.
Hey Mike, Could you please share the commercials over mail? i would like to avail your services right away. My exam date is 29th September. do you think i have enough time to improve?
I don’t know what you mean by commercials? Please explain what it is you are after.
Hi mike, i want to use your writing correction service. Please guide me how can i make payment from Pakistan? And also how you will confirm my subscription to your service?
Hi, I sent you an email about it.
I had purchased the writing service yesterday and had sent you an email with my task essay for evaluation. Since there was no acknowledgement for the same, its difficult for me to know if this was received and is in progress. Please confirm.
HI, you should have your essay back now.
Hello Mike,
Can you please give me an overall assessment and tell me how many writings I may need to send you to reach 7.5? I am not sure which of your packages is better for me to buy.
Thank you very much
In some countries, it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight.
How far do you agree with either of these views?
It is recommended in some countries that children start their official education when they turn four. However, this is different in other countries where children should start their studies when they turn seven or eight. I agree with both views under some conditions.
Going to school requires some preparation inside families because a child will be among others who may be much different in terms of thoughts and even of color in a school, and they should be made aware of what will happen and how they can deal with the problems. To do so, children should stay with family until the time when they are turn seven in order to have enough time to understand the upbringings which take some times to be comprehended by them, and the parents should communicate the upbringings to their children during this time and teach them some basic and significant rules such as respect a person who is older than them, respect different ideas, and not judging others based on sex and color.
However, nowadays, because of the economic crisis, parents are too busy with jobs to just cover their living cost such as housing and accommodation, so they do not have enough time to take their children’s upbringing more serious. In this condition, the children are in danger of being impolite in the future because they are not able to receive proper regulations from their family which is very significant for them at early age, which is mainly because of this fact that they are like a recording machine and learn from their surroundings too fast. Thus, if schools have this ability to concentrate on both formal education and upbringings, the children whose family whether are divorced or not are able to join schools as soon as possible, like when they turn four. As a result, they will be capable of learning whatever it was going to be taught in their family apart from their official education.
In conclusion, Children can begin their education when they turn four if schools’ teacher behave students as if their parents apart from paying attention to their education. However, if a child goes to school when they are seven years old, teacher can just focus on their education in the school.
I’ll give you a quick bit of feedback. I don’t see any of the grading criteria being good enough to get over seven and in addition to sending writing tasks you need to learn how to respond to essays more effectively. In particular, you have not really made any clear response regarding how far you agree with either view. You have overused the word “upbringing” and it’s often not used in a grammatically correct way in your sentences.
In some countries, it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight.
How far do you agree with either of these views?
It is recommended in some countries that children start their official education when they turn four. However, this is different in other countries where children should start their studies when they turn seven or eight. I agree with both views under some conditions.
Going to school requires some preparation inside families because a child will be among others who may be much different in terms of thoughts and even of color in a school, and they should be made aware of what will happen and how they can deal with the problems. To do so, children should stay with family until the time when they are turn seven in order to have enough time to understand the upbringings which take some times to be comprehended by them, and the parents should communicate the upbringings to their children during this time and teach them some basic and significant rules such as respect a person who is older than them, respect different ideas, and not judging others based on sex and color.
THE PARAGRAPH ABOVE DOES NOT SPECIFY WHICH AGE THE PARAGRAPH IS ABOUT UNTIL THE SECOND SENTENCE AND THIS SHOULD OCCUR IN THE FIRST SENTENCE… THIS LOWERS YOUR SCORE FOR COHERENCE AND COHESION
THE PARAGRAPH BELOW ALSO LACKS A TOPIC SENTENCE THAT INTRODUCES WHICH AGE GROUP YOU ARE DISCUSSING
However, nowadays, because of the economic crisis, parents are too busy with jobs to just cover their living cost such as housing and accommodation, so they do not have enough time to take their children’s upbringing more serious. In this condition, the children are in danger of being impolite in the future because they are not able to receive proper regulations from their family which is very significant for them at early age, which is mainly because of this fact that they are like a recording machine and learn from their surroundings too fast. Thus, if schools have this ability to concentrate on both formal education and upbringings, the children whose family whether are divorced or not are able to join schools as soon as possible, like when they turn four. As a result, they will be capable of learning whatever it was going to be taught in their family apart from their official education.
In conclusion, Children can begin their education when they turn four if schools’ teacher behave students as if their parents apart from paying attention to their education. However, if a child goes to school when they are seven years old, teacher can just focus on their education in the school.
I WOULD LIKE TO SEE SOME CLEAR STATEMENT OF WHICH SIDE OF THE ARGUMENT YOU AGREE WITH MORE STRONGLY… WE CAN’T GO TO SCHOOL AT FOUR AND AT SEVEN… YOU SEEM TO BE SETTING UP SOME SORT OF HYPOTHETICAL SITUATION IN WHICH YOU THINK THEY SHOULD GO TO SCHOOL AT A CERTAIN AGE AND INSTEAD I SUGGEST YOU JUST STICK WITH REALITY AND GIVE SOME SORT OF OPINION BASED ON HOW THINGS ACTUALLY ARE NOT HOW THEY IDEALLY COULD BE? IN THE END I DON’T EXACTLY KNOW WHAT YOUR OPINION IS AND WHAT THE REASON IS FOR IT SO I CAN’T GIVE YOU ANY MORE THAN SIX FOR TASK RESPONSE
Hi, Mike,
I sent you one essay for correction yesterday, on the 16th of August (and paid for it). Please review it, thanks,
Thanks you should have it back now.
Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in
many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies should be
required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women.
To what extent do you agree?
In many companies, strategic level positions, such as directors, CFO’s and GM’s are occupied by men despite the fact that women hold more than 50 percent jobs in many developed nations. I don’t agree to the suggestion of fixing a quota of these position based on gender to women only. The main reasons are lack of relevant skills for such jobs and encouragement of gender discrimination.
It is true that the women hold more jobs than men in many developed nations, however it does not necessarily mean that they have the relevant skills for high level jobs. Many important job roles require, strategic and management skills which may not be possessed by majority of women. Having more number of jobs simple does not imply that all women are holding management jobs. Fixing the quota or percentage for such roles may result in many positions being vacant due to lack of relevant skills. For example in Pakistan many women do not pursue accountancy qualifications, if the quota is fixed for high level accountancy roles , there would be shortage of skill and the position would remain vacant.
Secondly, allocation of a predetermined number of positions will encourage gender discrimination as the selection may not happen on the merit basis. This would demotivate the employees of other gender i.e. men. If a percentage is fixed for women, there are high chances that a male applicant who is more skillful may not be selected and this may also result in un-employment of skilled people. For example, in a Sindh province of Pakistan, a quota is fixed in universities of Karachi for rural areas due to which many deserving students in the urban areas don’t get the admission.
In the conclusion, I would like to state that, fixing of quota for any type of job will definitely employ more women, however it may lead to inappropriate hiring of staff due to a lack of relevant skills, further more it may encourage gender discrimination and also cause demotivation in men due to unemployment.
Hi, I think it is around a 7-7.5
some suggestions:
1. in the introduction try to say the extent of your opinion =how much…. It seems that you “totally disagree”
2. The topic sentence for paragraph 2 could be better
“The main reason why I disagree is that I feel that women may not possess all the required skills”
3. instead of starting the final paragraph with a concession [argument for the opposite of your opinion] I suggest you just restate your opinion
“In conclusion, I totally disagree that…”
Hi Mike
I needed your writing service, But unable to make payment says card denied though my card is valid and has cash in it I use debit card
What country are you in?
Hi Mike,
I have opted for your writing service for 10 writing assessments. Can you confirm that you have received 1 essay sample.
HI, you should have the task back now. If for some reason you have not received my email please let me know
Hello Mike,
I have already send you an email and this is one of my writings. Can you please give me an overall assessment and tell me how many writings I may need to send you to reach 7.5? I am not sure which of your packages is better for me to buy.
Thank you very much
Q:
Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It has been a quandary as to whether the best approach for public health improvement is raising the number of workout facilities or more efficient solutions are required. In my opinion, although the first proposal is a good step, further actions like reducing stress in job market and paying attention to people’s daily regimen are much more beneficial.
No doubt exercising is crucial to maintain fitness and wellbeing. Since growing the number of facilities will make them more accessible as well as cheaper, it can encourage more people to use them. For example, as there are gyms in university campuses, students, despite being busy with their courses, tend to work out more comparing to non-students. Furthermore, this growth in the number of facilities leads to a competitive environment and will result in centres lowering their membership prices and, therefore, affordability to more population.
Even though the first approach can enhance public health through exercising, it occurs to this writer that, stress, as well as junk food consumption, are the main culprits for epidemic illnesses such as cancer and cardiovascular diseases. According to a study conducted by Paul Sparegon, M.D., a prominent cardiologist in Toronto, in which he illustrated that as the number of work-hours is rising, more people are dealing with mental pressure and that, inevitably, more mortalities are occurring due to heart stroke. In addition, because of the fast pace of the modern life, couples hardly find enough time to prepare healthy food, which is the main reason of fast food outlets proliferation and unhealthy diets among workforce. These all prove that funding projects to reduce workplace-related frustrations in addition to adopting policies to prevent employees being overworked are better to be considered in budgetary allocation.
In conclusion, even though providing citizens with more athletic facilities contributes to positive impacts on people’s active lifestyle, in my opinion, it has little effects on factors which are reducing an average person’s state of wellbeing. As a result, measures such as reducing office hours and workers’ stress not only will lead to a better public physical health, but also will enhance their mental health.
I’ve had a very quick read of this because it’s Friday and it’s my most is it busy day of the week and because I’m not really interested in giving people free assessments of their writing due to the amount of time it takes to do this properly…. It takes me 20 minutes to properly assess task.
However having said that, I feel that this is not a bad first attempt and it should be at least seven or higher… on the whole it seems like your vocabulary and grammar are going to be good enough and you just need to work on the structure of your essays and getting your task response right. Some of the things I don’t like about your essay:
1. The final sentence of the introduction should make it clearer what the essay is about… Yours makes it seem like your essay is only about your opinion and not both sides and your opinion
2. I really hate references to specific studies that are obviously made up like your doctor was obviously made up… I absolutely detest it and feel that it is an unnecessary risk….it’s also unacademic because if you do this in academic writing you also need to mention the year of publication publisher location of publisher…and since you can’t do this in an IELTS exam it’s totally inappropriate to start mentioning specific studies
3. paragraphing is insufficiently clear and may result in five for cohesion and coherence… You can’t just write one big blob and instead you must separate your paragraph clearly using indentation or a blank line… I suggest a blank line
4. heart /is wrong should be heart-attack
5. it’s hard to know how many tasks you need to write but I would suggest that you at least write one answer for each of the three types of essays: http://www.ieltsanswers.com/ielts-writing-types-essays.html and send a task one
…in addition to this try to read lots of my model answers and learn from my structures
Hi Mike, I purchased a package of 4 writing corrections and sent you the first via email.
Please confirm that you received both payment and the writing essay.
Thanks!
Marie
Hi Mike I purchased essay correction service and sent two essays to your email. please review those essays. Thanks.
Thanks, I have your tasks and I will get them back to you today.
Hi Mike, I recently purchased IELTS writing correction service and sent over two essays through email. Please review my essays. Thanks!
Thanks
HI mike,
me and my husband would like to send our writing task in. Can i just purchase the one with 10 task and divide it beween the two of us? or do we need to subscribe individually? really looking forward to your guidance and an improvemnt in our ielts writing scores. Thank you
Yes, that is fine to split the tasks. If you will send tasks from different email addresses just let me know. Usually, I track the payment to the email address.
Hi Mike,
I want to opt for your writing service for 4 writing assessments. 1 assessment includes task1 and task 2 both could you please confirm.
Hi Mike,
Hi Mike,
I want to opt for your written correction facility. Could you please confirm that 4 writing tasks includes 4 letters + 4 essays for 30$? Also, what are the charges for 4 speaking task guidance?
My last score was 6 in writing and speaking and I want 8 in both. Please help
Thanks
Ankita
Hi $30 includes any FOUR tasks such as one task-1 and three task-2.
Speaking tests are 20USD for 30-40 minute sections.
Hi Mike,
I choose your correction service and made payment. I also sent you my first set for evaluation. Can you please confirm
Yes, I have your task. I will send it back to you in about one hour from now.
While recruiting a new employee, the employer should pay more attention to their personal qualities, rather than qualifications and experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.
Humans have two major aspects to themselves, i.e Professional and personal. It is argued that, when jobs are in question, employers should value the personal aspect over the professional aspect. I feel that putting either one ahead of another will have its pros and cons. Keeping that in mind, this essay will evaluate both the ends.
To begin with, personal traits serve as the building blocks of one’s character and morals. Taking into account the team playing skill and his notion of “each man for everyone”, the job seeker is an excellent prospect. However, imagine a situation where an excellent team player has no knowledge about the basics of the industry or isn’t remotely related to the position he has applied for or vice-versa. Hence, lack of any of the aforementioned aspects will make him nothing but a liability for the other team members.
Aditionally, personal traits like honesty and dedication or ability to learn play a critical role to carve an outstanding addition to the team. Although traits like these are like ladders to executive positions in professional world, the real question left unanswered is “are these enough?” What if a person is honest and dedicated but has no or little experience for the job he has applied for? What if he isn’t equipped to handle the pressure this job brings along? While keeping the importance of personal traits in mind, questions like these make me realize the importance of experience. It makes me realize the importance of balance between these two human aspects.
To recapitulate from my personal experience, both the aspects of a human life are supposed to work in tandem. Any aspect outweighing the other or disruption the balance required between the two aspects, will not make a great addition to the team. A seeker with right knowledge and right execution skills is battle ready.
Just a couple of key points if you want a full assessment you need to use my writing correction service:
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1. You have not answered the question… You need to state the extent you agree or disagree in the introduction and conclusion. I can see that you feel both aspects are important which suggests that you “somewhat agree” or “somewhat disagree” with the statement
2. Don’t use abbreviations like i.e. and you’ve misused it …it means “in other words.”
Hello Mike.
If I pay 70$ for 10 essays, do I need to send all 10 pieces of writing together? Or I can extend them and send one by one, let say, throughout a 10-day period ?
It’s best to send 1 or 2 at a time.
I will return them within 24 hours and often much quicker.
There is no time limit for sending them.
hi mike please my essay, thanks
Some people say that not all criminals should be sent to prison. Instead they should do unpaid work to help people in the community. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
It is argued by some people that petty offenders should be reformed through unpaid community work instead of putting them behind bars. I strongly agree that engaging them in nonsalaried volunteer work not only helps criminals to become productive and play a part in development of society but provides a cost effective approach for government to run prisons.
To begin with, during prison sentences, perpetrator is less likely to retrain and learn any new skills or correct their behavior and instead they mix with other criminal minded people. This only strengthens their criminal intentions and eventually they can lead back to path of crimes once punishment is over. Community service, on the other hand, is more peaceful and effective way to reform offender’s personality and moral behavior versus torturing them in prisons. This is mainly because by doing community work such as cleaning, offenders are able to give something positive back to society. This helps them rehabilitate themselves and eventually there will be less risk of their re offending neither in the number nor in seriousness of crimes.
Furthermore, prisons around the world are facing the problem of overcrowding and increase in number of criminals consequently raises the cost of maintaining and running prisons. For instance, a report by Pakistan Jail Department suggests that sending a person to prisons is 12 times more expensive than community work. Therefore based on facts, community service is proved to be less expensive approach with similar effects as it cuts the Government cost in running and maintaining prisons and solve the issue of overcrowding.
In conclusion, I reiterate that instead of imprisoning every accused person, involving them in some volunteer work is most efficient measure to improve and rehabilitate the offender’s personality and it also lessen Government burden in maintaining and running prisons.
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Hello mike,
hope all is well, i am looking to evaluate my writing task 2 , if you could help me know whats my current level that would be great thanks.
1) In every city the car is the king of the road. Cars cause death and injury and air pollution, and they make life difficult and dangerous for others. It is time to reduce the number of cars in our cities and to encourage other means of transport. Do you agree with this opinion?
Although in many cities people prefer cars as their primary means of transport, they also have negative affects such as polluting atmosphere and causing bodily harm to people. In my view I agree that by controlling the number of cars on roads and influencing people to opt for other forms of mobility, people will be able to save money, and also increase their work productivity.
A good reason for people not wanting to buy a vehicle and choosing other means to travel, is that it will help them in saving money. Today, vehicles are very expensive, people acquiring personal transport have to pay huge sum of money. In addition, they also have to pay for the repair and maintenance of their transport, because overtime parts of vehicle get damaged and there is a need to replace them. Furthermore, fuel is a necessity to operate a vehicle. Hence, people also end up paying for fuel expenses. As a result, these expenses deplete personal wealth.
Another reason to put less vehicles on road is that it will increase work productivity of people. This is because people spend a lot of time driving to reach destination. Hence, they waste more time in transition from one place to another. This results in making people tired. If people get exhausted while operating a vehicle, they are not able to concentrate at work, usually making mistakes. Thus, impacting their work productivity. I believe if people select other ways of commuting like public transport, they will be able to relax while going to work, this would make them less exhausted, thereby improving their work performance.
To conclude, controlled number of vehicles on roads in any city would help its people in saving their personal wealth and also benefit them in their work lives.
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Hi I wanted 2 task 1 and 2 task 2 writing correction. Can I go ahead with the payment. Can you tell me the amount in Indian Rupee
it’s $30 USD for the correction of four tasks
I don’t know what the prices in Indian rupee and it will fluctuate daily
Mike, thank you very much for sharing the URL’s. I will send you the payment and most likely a PDF or photo of my writing essays.
Hi Mike,
I have my exam scheduled on 27th of April. what do you suggest or recommend to gain a better score as this will be my 5th attempt. I would like to avail your services. Please guide, thanks.
Please see my suggestions for preparing for a test.
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You might want to use my writing correction
service there is enough time to send a couple of tasks
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Hello Mike,
Thank you very much for your support and help, I am really grateful and thankful. I am here to tell you that with your help I managed to increase my score from 5.5 to 6.5 and eventually to 7.
After getting writing correction from your side I had my first exam at 23rd of March and my result was: 6.5 W, two weeks before it was 5.5 W. Then, I bought your book and followed the instructions inside to achieve band 7 at 6th of April.
I would like to thank you again, and I am still suggesting your website to my friends. I wish I could come to you in the future to have more writing practices and to increase my score more and more.
Yours sincerely,
Wael Amar
Congratulations on getting the score you need. Thanks for sharing your story of success. Good luck for your
next challenge.
Hi Mike,
Could please assess my writing task 1 [The graph shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992]
The given graph illustrates the percentage of British radio and TV audiences over a three-month period starting in October in the year 1992.
Radio was the top form of media used by the Britons in the early mornings with nearly one-tenth of the audiences, which was far higher than the TV watcher (0%). The figure then rose significantly, skyrocketing to almost one out of three of the total audiences who listen to radio at 8:00 am. After this point, the number fell steadily reaching a trough at under 5%.
The TV was less popular in mornings being at under 10%. Following this, after lunch time it exceeded that of radio at around 2:00 pm, before soaring and reaching a peak at 8:00pm, when nearly half of the audience watch this type of media. After this, the figure plummeted to under 5%, finishing the day nearly at the same level as those who listen to radio.
Overall, what stands out from the graph is that radio experienced a high rate of listeners in mornings before lunchtime, while TV audiences were the highest at evenings.
Thanks
Eman
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Hi Mike,
I have bought your writing correction package today, and sent my first writing to your email. Hope you have received it
Thanks, I have it and will send it back to you shortly.
Hi Mike, I have my Exam om 11th May. I am really worried on Writing Section as I always stuck at 6.5 band. Can you please suggest what can I do to improve my band?
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Hi Admin, would you please help with a high-level evaluation:
high expense on wedding is positive development or negative with opinion?
Some people argue that the trend of extravagant spending on marriages is a right thing. While organizing lavish weddings has some upsides, I am of the opinion that the downsides of this kind of engagement seriously outweigh any positive aspects to it.
The main argument in favor of expensive weddings is that they create an industry, which ultimately helps economy by providing jobs to a large number of people. This is due to the fact that a wedding arrangement touches almost every node on the supply chain. Business transactions occur with vendors, event managers, transportation companies etc. in order to organize the entire show. As these organizations need manpower to support their operations, so they have to increase hiring and bring in more staff. Thus it is clear that by promoting expensive marriage ceremonies the economy also gets a much needed push.
On the contrary, by spending heavily on such costly affairs the financial health of families who host them takes a negative hit. The expenses in most of these weddings run into millions, as prices of all the raw-materials and equipment, which are required have been touching the sky. This puts a lot of financial burden on the parties making the payment, leading them in a future full of turbulence. For instance, in India several cases of suicide by parents of bride were reported in last year after indulging in heavy spending during marriages. In light of this fact, it would not be incorrect to label this practice of organizing money intensive marriages an evil one.
In conclusion, I personally believe that the disadvantages of marrying one’s child by burning money are far serious to even consider any merit of this kind of indulgence.
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Hi Mike just purchased the 4 essays correction and sent you an email yesterday.
Hi
I have sent my general training task 2 writing for marking.
Thanks I have it and will get it back to you today
Hi I have sent you my writing task 2 for marking.
Hey Mike,
Do you also provide Band 9 version for the task I am submitting my entry for evaluation? I understand you provide corrections or advise around better way of writing the idea but sharing Band 9 version as well will let us know how and what of writing one. Thanks – AK47
If you choose one of the tasks of written model answers for using the link below,
you will have a model answer. I’m not going to custom write a model answer
for any task of your choosing though. I can do this but it takes time and you’ll have to pay
the cost of editing a task for it, if you want this done.
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Hi,
I have read on the website that 4 writing tasks costs 30$. I would like to ask if it is possible to correct package of 3 essay and one letter and if it is possible to correct the 4 writing tasks one by one on different days not all at once??
Yes sure. Actually, I recommend you send them one at a time if you can.
Sometimes you can use the feedback to improve the next task
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Hi,
I have given test 4 times and every time I am getting overall 8, with reading and listening more than 8, but I am nit getting 7 in writing. I have read more than 300 essays and don’t have issue in Idea generation but still I am stuck at 6.5. I am lossing all the hopes now. Can you help me with it?
this is a really common problem and I can tell you that the problem is not your vocabulary and grammar. The problem is one of the two below
1. You not responding well to task instructions