Writing Common Mistake: Not Supporting Ideas with Examples
In IELTS Writing, particularly in Task 2, it’s not enough to simply state your ideas. Many candidates lose marks because they fail to provide specific examples to support their arguments. Without examples, your points may seem vague, underdeveloped, or lacking in credibility.
For instance, consider the following unsupported claim:
Technology has greatly impacted education.
While this statement is valid, it needs an example to illustrate the specific impact. Without one, the examiner may feel that the argument is incomplete.
How to Avoid This Mistake
Using relevant examples makes your arguments more convincing and demonstrates your ability to develop ideas. Here’s how to ensure you consistently support your points with examples:
a. Use Real-World or Hypothetical Examples
Examples can come from real-world events, general knowledge, or hypothetical scenarios.
- Real-World Example: For instance, during the COVID-19 pandemic, online learning platforms like Zoom and Google Classroom became essential tools for education.
- Hypothetical Example: For example, a student in a remote area might access high-quality courses through online learning, which would otherwise be unavailable to them.
b. Keep Examples Relevant
Ensure your examples directly support the point you’re making. Avoid adding irrelevant details that do not contribute to the argument.
c. Avoid Overloading with Examples
Use 1-2 examples per paragraph. Too many examples can overwhelm your essay and reduce the depth of your analysis.
d. Introduce Examples with Linking Phrases
Use phrases like:
- For instance
- For example
- Such as
- To illustrate
These phrases signal to the examiner that you are providing a specific example.
Examples of This Mistake and How to Fix It
Poor Example (Lack of Example)
Education plays an important role in reducing inequality.
Problem: This statement lacks depth and does not illustrate how education reduces inequality.
Improved Example
Education plays an important role in reducing inequality. For instance, government-funded scholarship programmes enable students from low-income families to attend university, helping them secure better job opportunities and improve their socio-economic status.
Why It Works: The example provides a clear, concrete illustration of how education reduces inequality.
Poor Example (Vague Example)
Technology helps people connect with each other.
Problem: The example is too general and does not give enough detail.
Improved Example
Technology helps people connect with each other. For example, social media platforms like Facebook and WhatsApp allow friends and family to stay in touch, even if they live in different countries.
Why It Works: This version uses a specific, relatable example, which strengthens the argument.
Poor Example (Irrelevant Example)
Education is important. For instance, people enjoy watching educational videos on YouTube.
Problem: While educational videos may be informative, this example is not directly relevant to the importance of formal education.
Improved Example
Education is important as it provides individuals with the knowledge and skills required for career advancement. For instance, vocational training programmes equip students with practical skills that prepare them for specific jobs, such as electricians or plumbers.
Why It Works: The improved version aligns the example with the argument, making it more relevant and impactful.
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