Cohesion and Coherence: Letter Writing

Try to put your response to each question in its own paragraph.
Avoid unnecessary repetition of information.

Poor topic sentence
Try to write topic sentences that introduce the key point of the paragraph and also send a signal to the examiner about which bullet point you are addressing.
As an illustrative example lets imagine the bullet point is as follows:
·       Discuss relevant work experience for this job.

 This bullet point should be responded to by starting the paragraph with a sentence that signals your answer to this question.
.     I studied accounting at Northampton University. Now I’m working as an accountant.

 With regards to my background, I have over 10 years experience. For the last two years I have been working as an accountant. Previously,….

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