It’s true that opinions on clichés can vary among graders. While some may prefer more original phrasing, others might not mind as long as the essay is well-structured and clear. It’s generally a good idea to avoid overused expressions to make your writing stand out, but don’t stress too much. Focus on clarity and coherence, and use clichés sparingly if they help convey your point effectively.
“On one hand, on the other hand.” is seldom used by native writers but often used by low-level IELTS writers; it is best avoided.
“Some people believe” is often given in the instructions and best rephrased as:
• Many argue that…
• There is a common perception that…
• Some individuals hold the view that…
• It is widely considered that
